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01 December 2002, 06:31 PM
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Fitment
*have been fitting kits for a few years and have many happy customers in the UK - ..have been fitting kits for years...
*You have a kit that - IF you have...
*we will through - we will throw
*start some where - start somewhere
*have been fitting kits for a few years and have many happy customers in the UK - ..have been fitting kits for years...
*You have a kit that - IF you have...
*we will through - we will throw
*start some where - start somewhere
01 December 2002, 06:41 PM
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Re Spray and Painting
*Re Spray - Respray
*If u have - you
*need attended to - attending to
*you paint - your paint
*paint… or perhaps - paint, or perhaps
*your just sick - you're just sick
*colour… then - colour, then
*why not book in for a repair or respray. - respray?
* What ever - Whatever
*the problem is, our teams are sure to be able to fix the problem - Whatever the problem, our teams are sure to be able to fix it.
*When complete, the paint should last well and be reasonably resistant to stone chips. - Sell that product! "Should" and "reasonably" would give me doubts about using this.
*. - Random fullstop between paragraphs. "Lacquer" and "When"
*Taking short cuts here with cheaper back street painters won’t pay in the long run. - Would help to explain why - list the problems that *can* occur with "cheaper back street painters".
*Re Spray - Respray
*If u have - you
*need attended to - attending to
*you paint - your paint
*paint… or perhaps - paint, or perhaps
*your just sick - you're just sick
*colour… then - colour, then
*why not book in for a repair or respray. - respray?
* What ever - Whatever
*the problem is, our teams are sure to be able to fix the problem - Whatever the problem, our teams are sure to be able to fix it.
*When complete, the paint should last well and be reasonably resistant to stone chips. - Sell that product! "Should" and "reasonably" would give me doubts about using this.
*. - Random fullstop between paragraphs. "Lacquer" and "When"
*Taking short cuts here with cheaper back street painters won’t pay in the long run. - Would help to explain why - list the problems that *can* occur with "cheaper back street painters".
01 December 2002, 06:46 PM
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Specialist Paints
*spraying with specialist paints - spraying the..
*for example amount -For example, amount required
*colours recommend - recommended
*Basically what ever you need to know to help you make your final decision. - Yes? "Basically, we know everything necessary to help you...."
*spraying with specialist paints - spraying the..
*for example amount -For example, amount required
*colours recommend - recommended
*Basically what ever you need to know to help you make your final decision. - Yes? "Basically, we know everything necessary to help you...."
01 December 2002, 06:53 PM
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Custom Work
*This is a combination of everything we do rolled into 1!… by this we mean fitting actual lexus clusters to calibra, fitting cossie arches to a corsa, putting saxo bumpers on a punto… again its very custom and is probably the 1 subject that has more possabilities than anything… how mad you make your car is your choice… if you think it can be done… we’ll do it!… phone for a quote This is a combination of everything we do rolled into 1!… by this we mean fitting actual lexus clusters to calibra, fitting cossie arches to a corsa, putting saxo bumpers on a punto… again its very custom and is probably the 1 subject that has more possabilities than anything… how mad you make your car is your choice… if you think it can be done… we’ll do it!… phone for a quote - <shudder> This is a combination of everything we do, rolled into one! By this we mean fitting actual Lexus clusters to a Calibra, Cossie arches to a Corsa, Saxo bumpers onto a Punto... Again, it's very customisable and is probably the one subject that has more possibilities than any other modification. How mad you make your car is your choice! If you think it can be done, we'll do it! Phone for a quote." May be worth putting in a hyperlink on PHONE so that your number pops up...
* its called - it's called...
* if you think - If you think
* way to go - way to go.
*This is a combination of everything we do rolled into 1!… by this we mean fitting actual lexus clusters to calibra, fitting cossie arches to a corsa, putting saxo bumpers on a punto… again its very custom and is probably the 1 subject that has more possabilities than anything… how mad you make your car is your choice… if you think it can be done… we’ll do it!… phone for a quote This is a combination of everything we do rolled into 1!… by this we mean fitting actual lexus clusters to calibra, fitting cossie arches to a corsa, putting saxo bumpers on a punto… again its very custom and is probably the 1 subject that has more possabilities than anything… how mad you make your car is your choice… if you think it can be done… we’ll do it!… phone for a quote - <shudder> This is a combination of everything we do, rolled into one! By this we mean fitting actual Lexus clusters to a Calibra, Cossie arches to a Corsa, Saxo bumpers onto a Punto... Again, it's very customisable and is probably the one subject that has more possibilities than any other modification. How mad you make your car is your choice! If you think it can be done, we'll do it! Phone for a quote." May be worth putting in a hyperlink on PHONE so that your number pops up...
* its called - it's called...
* if you think - If you think
* way to go - way to go.
ive deleted the fooking contacts telephone number. bugger need to re think what to do now 
01 December 2002, 07:00 PM
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De-Badging
*combine - Combine
*combine these sophisticated tools with our new rubbing and polishing compounds to remove glue etc left when removing badges or side strips. It now means that there’s no more respraying of panels because you’ve damaged your paintwork removing glue. - Combine these sophisticated tools with our new rubbing and polishing compounds and it means that there's no more respraying of panels due to damage to paintwork when removing the glue.
*wolfs clothing - wolf's clothing
*The more realistic side of it is cars that are modified with smoothness don’t want stickers and badges etc plastered all over them… - Realistically, cars that are smoothed don't want stickers and badges...
*not standing out like a car that’s ram raided an accessories shop - Doesn't sound terribly professional....
*are hardly gonna - going to...
*we all have to start some where and this is where the fun begins
- "somewhere" and needs a fullstop.
*combine - Combine
*combine these sophisticated tools with our new rubbing and polishing compounds to remove glue etc left when removing badges or side strips. It now means that there’s no more respraying of panels because you’ve damaged your paintwork removing glue. - Combine these sophisticated tools with our new rubbing and polishing compounds and it means that there's no more respraying of panels due to damage to paintwork when removing the glue.
*wolfs clothing - wolf's clothing
*The more realistic side of it is cars that are modified with smoothness don’t want stickers and badges etc plastered all over them… - Realistically, cars that are smoothed don't want stickers and badges...
*not standing out like a car that’s ram raided an accessories shop - Doesn't sound terribly professional....
*are hardly gonna - going to...
*we all have to start some where and this is where the fun begins
- "somewhere" and needs a fullstop.
01 December 2002, 07:07 PM
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Your Ideas...
*us for a chat… - us for a chat?
*you never know - You never...
*reality!. - Punctuation
*has, perhaps - has. Perhaps
*anything YOU can - Anything
*can think of - Fullstop
*Sending an email -
Thankyou for submitting your enquiry.
You're visit is important to us. We will be in contact shortly.
"Thank you" "Your visit"
*us for a chat… - us for a chat?
*you never know - You never...
*reality!. - Punctuation
*has, perhaps - has. Perhaps
*anything YOU can - Anything
*can think of - Fullstop
*Sending an email -
Thankyou for submitting your enquiry.
You're visit is important to us. We will be in contact shortly.
"Thank you" "Your visit"
01 December 2002, 07:09 PM
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Koncept Cars
Nothing written here and also the "Call or Email" link at the bottom of the page does not work - get Page Not Found. As this has been copied onto every page, it means that every one doesn't work.
Nothing written here and also the "Call or Email" link at the bottom of the page does not work - get Page Not Found. As this has been copied onto every page, it means that every one doesn't work.
01 December 2002, 07:25 PM
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NOS
*the states - the States
*be warned kids - remove the "kids" - it's patronising
*done by our selves - ourselves
*due to hearing so many horror stories - Unnecessary. "Fitting of this specialist item must be done by ourselves."
*the states - the States
*be warned kids - remove the "kids" - it's patronising
*done by our selves - ourselves
*due to hearing so many horror stories - Unnecessary. "Fitting of this specialist item must be done by ourselves."
01 December 2002, 07:33 PM
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Wheel Colouring
*testing is underway - Testing
*too long till - too long until
*the customers specification - customer's
*wheel condition and prices - ?? Should this be tacked onto the previous sentence?
*testing is underway - Testing
*too long till - too long until
*the customers specification - customer's
*wheel condition and prices - ?? Should this be tacked onto the previous sentence?
01 December 2002, 07:39 PM
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About Us
*becoming more recognised daily for his abilty with automotive bodywork - steadily becoming more recognised for his *ability*...
*about the business would and gain - ?? "would and gain?"
*vast amounts of money was spent - were spent
*twodemo - two demo
*companies through out the UK - throughout
*ICE to show car standards - If you use ICE here, you should use ICE on the ICE page, not Ice... Consistency and all that.
*having anf MOT - an MOT
*becoming more recognised daily for his abilty with automotive bodywork - steadily becoming more recognised for his *ability*...
*about the business would and gain - ?? "would and gain?"
*vast amounts of money was spent - were spent
*twodemo - two demo
*companies through out the UK - throughout
*ICE to show car standards - If you use ICE here, you should use ICE on the ICE page, not Ice... Consistency and all that.
*having anf MOT - an MOT
01 December 2002, 07:43 PM
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All done! 
These are the main "mistakes". The sentence structure isn't brilliant at times, but I'm not getting into too great a detail here.
Hope this all helps.
These are the main "mistakes". The sentence structure isn't brilliant at times, but I'm not getting into too great a detail here. Hope this all helps.
03 December 2002, 01:45 PM
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From "Custom Exhaust"
How about:
We can produce a vast range of tailpipes, with sizes and styles to suit all cars and customer requirements. Call or email us to discuss the possibilities.
Each system is made using high quality stainless steel (18/10?). This grade is more resistant to road salt and water than that used by other big name custom exhaust builders. The quality can be seen by all, perfect welding, fit etc. We guarantee that you’ll be impressed...
or, if you want to make a good impression and get professional results, pay someone to proofread and review the whole site
Isn't big name custom exhaust builders a bit of a contradiction
Good luck.
There is a vast range of tailpipes, sizes and styles to suit all requirements and cars. Call or email to discuss possibilities.
Each system is made using a high quality grade. This grade is more resistant to road salts and water when put in comparison with other big name custom exhaust builders on the market today. The quality is there to be seen by all, perfect welding, fit etc. Guaranteed you’ll be impressed...
Each system is made using a high quality grade. This grade is more resistant to road salts and water when put in comparison with other big name custom exhaust builders on the market today. The quality is there to be seen by all, perfect welding, fit etc. Guaranteed you’ll be impressed...
We can produce a vast range of tailpipes, with sizes and styles to suit all cars and customer requirements. Call or email us to discuss the possibilities.
Each system is made using high quality stainless steel (18/10?). This grade is more resistant to road salt and water than that used by other big name custom exhaust builders. The quality can be seen by all, perfect welding, fit etc. We guarantee that you’ll be impressed...
or, if you want to make a good impression and get professional results, pay someone to proofread and review the whole site
Isn't big name custom exhaust builders a bit of a contradiction
Good luck.
03 December 2002, 02:49 PM
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super_si - was it you who allegedly knew "something" about a certain footballer and a certain other footballer's wife??
Based on your comments, i laid bets that there was an element of truth in it. Right now, i'm being called in for payment.
Is this just a patience thing, or were you hopping onto the back of a bandwagon...???
Based on your comments, i laid bets that there was an element of truth in it. Right now, i'm being called in for payment.
Is this just a patience thing, or were you hopping onto the back of a bandwagon...???
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