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Old 07 May 2011 | 10:24 AM
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http://pistonheads.com/sales/2779843.htm

This is an add for a scooby owned by a much missed friend.

Is the price too high/low?

Anything else that would help it sell ?

Thanks in advance.

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Old 07 May 2011 | 11:06 AM
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Sorry to hear of your loss.
Old 07 May 2011 | 11:25 AM
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i think if you add more pictures it will be better
Old 07 May 2011 | 11:49 AM
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idd some more pics would help maybe some of the dings on the back bumper as well.
Old 07 May 2011 | 01:57 PM
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Originally Posted by matt-c
http://pistonheads.com/sales/2779843.htm

This is an add for a scooby owned by a much missed friend.

Is the price too high/low?

Anything else that would help it sell ?

Thanks in advance.

Matt
Hi, also really sorry to hear of your loss, ref the add, you have a near identical car to mine.. mine is 54 plate with 74k but yours looks cleaner, paintwork looks in better condition i think... i paid £4900 last month so i would guess at your price it will sell no problems... i looked for months to find mine and would've snapped your car up very quickly had i found it...

hope this helps..
Old 07 May 2011 | 11:32 PM
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Thanks, glad the price is about right, will try to sort some more pics.

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Old 07 May 2011 | 11:47 PM
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Sorry to hear of your loss. I would remove reference to the late husband; if I were a buyer that may put me off.

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Old 08 May 2011 | 12:00 AM
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Originally Posted by dnc
Sorry to hear of your loss. I would remove reference to the late husband; if I were a buyer that may put me off.

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how come , its shows a geniune reason for selling rather than off loading a problem car, either way it wouldnt put me off
Old 08 May 2011 | 12:16 AM
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Likewise - I can't see how anyone would be put off by that? Can't get a much more genuine reason for sale... really hope that statement doesn't offend Matt as it's not intended to.




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